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Ameliorating A's avatar

It's so so beautiful. Loved this. The emotions flowed so well 🤌🏻🤌🏻✨✨

Tushar Pandey's avatar

thank you AA :)

Ritika's avatar

Its beautiful. I loved how you changed from stanzz to stanza to present multiple scenerios. Very beautifully presented🫶🙌🌻

Tushar Pandey's avatar

thank you 😊😊

डॉ अर्चना मामोरिया's avatar

मेरे विचार से रचनाकार के अधूरेपन में ही उसकी पूर्णता छुपी है. जिस दिन रचनाकार यह मान ले की वह जो कहना चाहता था उसने सब कुछ कह दिया. उस दिन से ही उसकी रचनात्मकता और कल्पनाशीलता दम तोड़ देगीं बहुत सुंदर प्रयास.

बधाई👌👏

Tushar Pandey's avatar

बिल्कुल सही कहा आपने, धन्यवाद 🙏🏻🙏🏻

Khushi's avatar

Seems like your writing style is really very diverse , It was little different from your usual ones , loved it. I loved the free flowing ideas , your poem seems boundless , and yes all four are matching your own benchmark.

Tushar Pandey's avatar

humbled 😇

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

What a beautiful peice of writing sir .

So beautiful and adorable . ✨🫶🏻

That note came to life . 🙌🏻

Tushar Pandey's avatar

Yes it sure did, thanks!!