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Ameliorating A's avatar

Damnn!! This was very interesting. I didn't read the subtitle earlier and thought it was a complete poem. But later on realised that they all are different.

Mujhe neem vali sabse badhiya lgi, aur vo davanal vali bhi..kuch kuch mujhe samjh nhi aaya kyuki meri hindi bhi jyada acchi nhi hai shyd ( I'm neither too fluent in hindi nor english.)

But bahut badhiya tha yeh.

Loved it really!!

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Tushar Pandey's avatar

Thank you! If you remember you had suggested in a comment to make a collection of all short poems. Thanks again :)

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Ameliorating A's avatar

Ohh yeah. I do remember that now. Thank you for converting them into this :)) . It's great!!

I'm glad you came back. My brain doesn't understand poetries too well at times, but I like reading them and love the stories:))) Gotta check out bindu one again.

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